Post by guest on Jan 2, 2008 22:57:42 GMT
Accepted! Welcome to the Board!
Your Bio was fairly interesting, particularly the 'Scenario' writing.
Glad to have another Axis Recruit.
~Danny
Account E-Mail: Edited Out!
Name: Edzard Crimm
Nationality:
German
What Army will Your Character Serve Beneath?
Nazi/German Army is the Only Option at The Moment:
Nazi it is then
Character History:
Edzard was born in Wiesbaden Germany to a Clockmaker, his mother, his father would never play a part in his life unfortunately. Edzard took to school like a duck to water and often helped his teachers teach the other students. He graduated at the top of his class and soon after went to the best school he could get a scholarship to. All through his educational career Edzard excelled in sciences and in math. Shortly after graduation he landed a job as an engineer where he made good money and took care of his mother. Edzard loved explosives the most and was always trying to come up with new ways to safely destroy anything that needed demolishing. After a near fatal mistake to bystanders Edzard was fired and his reputation was tarnished. He figured that the only option he had left to develop his passion was in the military. Not one week after his termination he signed up and went off for training. Edzard vast intellect keep him on his commander’s good side and he usually received special benefits from them. His supervisors noticed rather early his knack for explosives and transferred him to a demolitions unit. There he used every free moment he had to develop new weapons for the fatherland.
Military Rank:
Unteroffizier
So please choose wisely, use the following links to help you choose.
Nazi/German Military Ranks!
Writing Sample:
Scenario: You’re alone behind enemy lines and you get the eerie feeling someone’s watching you. You’re trying to remain quiet, stay low, work your way back to the frontlines - but you can’t help but feel you’re being followed… (How does your character React? What’s running through their mind?)
“Just say low and keep making your way back to the front line. These idiot Americans will never notice you they are to cocky in their ways.” He thought to himself as he gripped his rifle tighter. He knew that he was in a bad spot but he also knew that he had to keep moving, he couldn’t succumb to the fear. He soon heard a noise up ahead of him. “Couldn’t be the line, that’s over the next hill, Damn” As he diverted his path around the noises that seemed to be coming closer he pulled out a small contraption that he had put together the week before. It was a lot like a mine in the fact that it had a pressure plate that set it off but it was camouflaged so that it could be place onto a tree for a more horizontal blast, rather than vertical. He reached up and attached it around a large tree he didn’t want to be seen so he was only able to get it up to knee high, but out of desperation he placed his helmet on it to add shrapnel and to hopefully divert attention away from himself if need be. He sank back down onto the ground and continued away from the noises. No mater how much he wanted to get up and run to get away he knew that would be a fatal mistake. He looked back over his shoulder as he heard an American soldier yell out “Look what I fou…” He knew what stopped the soldiers speech, the American had heard the dooming click of Edzards device.
BOOOOM!!!!!!
The American went sailing and it looked as if two more might have gone down with him. “I love my job.” He mumbled to himself under his breath. But now they were definitely going to be after him. He turned his head towards the front line all the time wondering what the commotion behind him looked like, he dared not look, he just kept on with his steady pace.
Your Bio was fairly interesting, particularly the 'Scenario' writing.
Glad to have another Axis Recruit.~Danny
Account E-Mail: Edited Out!
Name: Edzard Crimm
Nationality:
German
What Army will Your Character Serve Beneath?
Nazi/German Army is the Only Option at The Moment:
Nazi it is then
Character History:
Edzard was born in Wiesbaden Germany to a Clockmaker, his mother, his father would never play a part in his life unfortunately. Edzard took to school like a duck to water and often helped his teachers teach the other students. He graduated at the top of his class and soon after went to the best school he could get a scholarship to. All through his educational career Edzard excelled in sciences and in math. Shortly after graduation he landed a job as an engineer where he made good money and took care of his mother. Edzard loved explosives the most and was always trying to come up with new ways to safely destroy anything that needed demolishing. After a near fatal mistake to bystanders Edzard was fired and his reputation was tarnished. He figured that the only option he had left to develop his passion was in the military. Not one week after his termination he signed up and went off for training. Edzard vast intellect keep him on his commander’s good side and he usually received special benefits from them. His supervisors noticed rather early his knack for explosives and transferred him to a demolitions unit. There he used every free moment he had to develop new weapons for the fatherland.
Military Rank:
Unteroffizier
So please choose wisely, use the following links to help you choose.
Nazi/German Military Ranks!
Writing Sample:
Scenario: You’re alone behind enemy lines and you get the eerie feeling someone’s watching you. You’re trying to remain quiet, stay low, work your way back to the frontlines - but you can’t help but feel you’re being followed… (How does your character React? What’s running through their mind?)
“Just say low and keep making your way back to the front line. These idiot Americans will never notice you they are to cocky in their ways.” He thought to himself as he gripped his rifle tighter. He knew that he was in a bad spot but he also knew that he had to keep moving, he couldn’t succumb to the fear. He soon heard a noise up ahead of him. “Couldn’t be the line, that’s over the next hill, Damn” As he diverted his path around the noises that seemed to be coming closer he pulled out a small contraption that he had put together the week before. It was a lot like a mine in the fact that it had a pressure plate that set it off but it was camouflaged so that it could be place onto a tree for a more horizontal blast, rather than vertical. He reached up and attached it around a large tree he didn’t want to be seen so he was only able to get it up to knee high, but out of desperation he placed his helmet on it to add shrapnel and to hopefully divert attention away from himself if need be. He sank back down onto the ground and continued away from the noises. No mater how much he wanted to get up and run to get away he knew that would be a fatal mistake. He looked back over his shoulder as he heard an American soldier yell out “Look what I fou…” He knew what stopped the soldiers speech, the American had heard the dooming click of Edzards device.
BOOOOM!!!!!!
The American went sailing and it looked as if two more might have gone down with him. “I love my job.” He mumbled to himself under his breath. But now they were definitely going to be after him. He turned his head towards the front line all the time wondering what the commotion behind him looked like, he dared not look, he just kept on with his steady pace.