Cobus Mayer

[Keegan Schwarz]

Character Name: Cobus Mayer

Rank: Other

Nationality: Dutch, speaks Flemish

History: Born on September 1, 1923, in Ede, Netherlands, Cobus Moshe Mayer was introduced into the family of Kfir and Anika Mayer. His head was thickly covered in mahogany hued hair, and his eyes were the rare color of amber, having a golden hued to them. He had two elder brothers, who both moved out and started their own families. His infant years were pretty easy, in his mind. He had a good family, great health, and amazing intelligence. His first year of school started when he was the age of six. His teacher's were amazed with the smarts of Cobus, giving him higher grade level school work to challenge him. When he was in highschool, Hilter came into power and started to pick away the Jewish people's rights. His parents were starting to get weary about Adolf, talking to Cobus about how before they (The Jewish community) weren't having all of the small rights being taken away. Before long, he had to quit going to school all together to not be taken by the Nazi's. His parents had been looking for a close Christian friend that could help them hide from the Nazi's.

Writing Sample: The morning was humid, quiet, and... different. With eyelids slowly fluttering open, Cobus looked at the wooden beams holding the ceiling up above his family's heads. Moving a tired hand to an eye, he rubbed the sleep out. "Cobus, get out of bed, your dad will be annoyed if you're not up!" hollered Mother as she knocked on the white oak door of the room. "I'm coming, Mother, don't wait!" he replied as the covers were removed forcefully to the side. Swinging his long legs over the side of the bed, Cobus stood up as the lights were turned on over head, "Hurry up! It's six-thirty and you have chores to do." "Great, Dad is in one of his 'get everything done' days," he thought to himself as Mother thrust a pair of clean slacks, a white dress shirt, and black socks at his chest. Groaning sleepily, he nodded and closed the door to change into the day's clothes. After a few minutes of stumbling and changing, Cobus finally got out into the living room just as he was finishing fixing his brunette hued hair. "Breakfast is the usual, butter and toast," Mother said as the wooden boards creaked underfoot. "Great..." the young man murmured as he pulled a chair out from the circular table.

[PuNk! ™]

Hello Keegan,

there's a few things I need to point out to you before you continue with the rest of your incomplete application. First of all you must write within a third person perspective and not a first person perspective. This site revolves around a third person view, particularly when it comes to being able to control various NPCs (non-playable-characters) during combat.

Secondly, I would much rather appreciate you submitting a full application than attempting to complete it within stages upon the forum. I suggest writing it to completion within a word document and then submitting it fully upon the site.

We're always here to help you in regards to writing your application, if needed, but fragmented applications merely show a half-hearted attempt at creating your application.

This thread will be deleted within 48hrs, I suggest copying what you've written if you wish to save it and only submitting a completed application when you've finished. Again, if you require any help with creating your application, don't hesitate to ask.

Thank you,
~Danny

[Keegan Schwarz]

Well, I made the edits, Danny-boy . In both of the history and writing sample!

[PuNk! ™]

Just to clarify Keegan, your application is in regard to a civilian role yes? Just need that clarifying before I may accept your application - thanks.
~Danny

[Keegan Schwarz]

yup civilian is right