Post by Brecken Neumann on Dec 13, 2007 23:05:21 GMT
Denied!
You've failed to complete the whole application appropriately, please use a little more Enthusiasm in your writing, such as details and descriptions regarding your character.
Some things you could include, span from; where was he raised? What does he look like? What's his personality like? You've also ignored the scenario i've set out for you to fill-in as your character, so please ammend that if possible.
Thank you, feel free to ask for help.
~Danny[/i]
Account E-Mail: Razorboy246@yahoo.com
Name:Brecken Neumann
Nationality:
- Us marines
What Army will Your Character Serve Beneath?
UK or US: US
Character History:
- He loves hanging out with his family and he always loved hanging with friends and playing soccer and football and all the other fun stuff. But he also liked going to war to serve for his country.
Military Rank:
- Captain
So please choose wisely, use the following links to help you choose.
US Military Ranks!
Writing Sample:
Scenario: When he goes to war all he can think about is being on the front line and serving for his country. Always when hes out there he thinks about his family and what might happen to him out there on the battlefiend will he die or will he go home safe to his own family.(How does your character React? What’s running through their mind?)
You've failed to complete the whole application appropriately, please use a little more Enthusiasm in your writing, such as details and descriptions regarding your character.
Some things you could include, span from; where was he raised? What does he look like? What's his personality like? You've also ignored the scenario i've set out for you to fill-in as your character, so please ammend that if possible.
Thank you, feel free to ask for help.
~Danny[/i]
Account E-Mail: Razorboy246@yahoo.com
Name:Brecken Neumann
Nationality:
- Us marines
What Army will Your Character Serve Beneath?
UK or US: US
Character History:
- He loves hanging out with his family and he always loved hanging with friends and playing soccer and football and all the other fun stuff. But he also liked going to war to serve for his country.
Military Rank:
- Captain
So please choose wisely, use the following links to help you choose.
US Military Ranks!
Writing Sample:
Scenario: When he goes to war all he can think about is being on the front line and serving for his country. Always when hes out there he thinks about his family and what might happen to him out there on the battlefiend will he die or will he go home safe to his own family.(How does your character React? What’s running through their mind?)