Post by Stephen Colly on Jul 1, 2010 17:35:57 GMT
BANG! BANG!
The last fading gun shots echoed out in the distance. Mist hung in the air, dust particles merged with it giving it an eerie atmosphere. A skirmish battle had just come to an end, with both small sides retreating.
It had occurred in woodland. The trees had stood tall and defensive throughout whilst chaos had occurred beneath their bowels. But now all was silent, the trees were silent, the mist floated across the landscape out into the countryside, leaving the eerie place. A few bodies were lying on the ground, bodies of German and British soldiers, all with families who would all be getting the same letter telling them of their loss. War was extremely horrible.
Nothing moved apart from a few crows who circled above the bodies, ready to peck at them. A few birds twittered in the trees but that was it. Both armies had retreated and had left their dead and wounded in the woods, not going back for them. Nearly all of the fallen men were dead or had died of their wounds. Apart from one. Stephen Colly had been shot in the chest; he was bleeding, loosing a great deal of the blood. He was lying, propped up against a tree and clutching his gun shot wound, his hand shaking...covered in blood.
He had been shooting wildly at anything and everything and had been hitting a few Germans but had not noticed the bullet which eventually wounded him, it had come out of no-where and shot him right there in the chest. The other men around him had begun to retreat and had been calling out to him to get back but they hadn’t realized how seriously his wound had been. He had shouted back weakly at them to stay or at least help him but the men were too scared and wanting to save their own skin, to save his.
So he sat there, staring out weakly at the mist and trying to stay conscious. His breathing was slow. Tears were running down his face, he looked very venerable. The thoughts that rushed through his mind were everything that had happened in his 19 years of living. His family, his horse, his friends, his childhood, the army training, Edward, Daniel, Nathan, Rhys, Niamh...he was doing this as he was afraid he would die any second. He shifted slightly, the sharp pain in his side made him gasp and he closed his eyes, wanting for the darkness to take him.
The last fading gun shots echoed out in the distance. Mist hung in the air, dust particles merged with it giving it an eerie atmosphere. A skirmish battle had just come to an end, with both small sides retreating.
It had occurred in woodland. The trees had stood tall and defensive throughout whilst chaos had occurred beneath their bowels. But now all was silent, the trees were silent, the mist floated across the landscape out into the countryside, leaving the eerie place. A few bodies were lying on the ground, bodies of German and British soldiers, all with families who would all be getting the same letter telling them of their loss. War was extremely horrible.
Nothing moved apart from a few crows who circled above the bodies, ready to peck at them. A few birds twittered in the trees but that was it. Both armies had retreated and had left their dead and wounded in the woods, not going back for them. Nearly all of the fallen men were dead or had died of their wounds. Apart from one. Stephen Colly had been shot in the chest; he was bleeding, loosing a great deal of the blood. He was lying, propped up against a tree and clutching his gun shot wound, his hand shaking...covered in blood.
He had been shooting wildly at anything and everything and had been hitting a few Germans but had not noticed the bullet which eventually wounded him, it had come out of no-where and shot him right there in the chest. The other men around him had begun to retreat and had been calling out to him to get back but they hadn’t realized how seriously his wound had been. He had shouted back weakly at them to stay or at least help him but the men were too scared and wanting to save their own skin, to save his.
So he sat there, staring out weakly at the mist and trying to stay conscious. His breathing was slow. Tears were running down his face, he looked very venerable. The thoughts that rushed through his mind were everything that had happened in his 19 years of living. His family, his horse, his friends, his childhood, the army training, Edward, Daniel, Nathan, Rhys, Niamh...he was doing this as he was afraid he would die any second. He shifted slightly, the sharp pain in his side made him gasp and he closed his eyes, wanting for the darkness to take him.