Post by Hainlech Himler on Jun 1, 2008 11:05:58 GMT
Accepted! Welcome to the board!
- Make sure you read over your posts in future, as there are quite a few mistakes. Particularly at the bottom, when giving "Translations"; it's always crucial you supply the English Meanings clearly.
Otherwise, no one will understand your posts!
~Danny
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Name:Hainlech Himmler
Nationality:
Germany
What Army will Your Character Serve Beneath?
Nazi/German Army
Character History bio:
Hainlech Himmler born in Berlin,Germany, 1904. His father was a commanding officer of a German platoon in world war one. Hainlech had no occupation before world war two and was studing to become a politician. He also studied English and became fluent.
Hainlech first saw active service at the outbrake of world war two in Poland during the siege of Warsaw and went on to follow in his fathers foot steps and became a Platoon leader.
For his courage at the battle of the Bulge he was rewarded by joining the Ranks of the SS.
When the war ended he hoped to go back to Berlin and become a Politician.
Military Rank:
Corporrall
Writing Sample:
It was a dark moonless night and the rain beat down upon the lone German officer Hainlech Himmler. He crept through the bombed town there did not seem to be a living thing for miles.
It was then he heared the sound of distant voices he was confused he thought he was alone. He could not make out their language but if they were German they may be able to help him. Then a shot rang out followed by a deafening scream.
A wounded German staggered out of a building a sea of blood flowing from his mouth. when Hinlech steeped forward to help he heard a British voice shout "He's wounded lets finish him". As the Brit emerged from the ruined building Hainlech squeezed the trigger of his Mp40 but he cursed as he only heard a click. It was out out of ammunition. The British soldier clubbed the wounded German to with the but of his Lee-Enfield. Hainlech drew his Luger as fast as possible and fired two shots which pierced the enemy's head.
With his last breath of life the German soldier whispered "Laufen Sie für Götter Willen Lauf"! Hainlech ran full pelt away from the scene with other Brits on his tail.
Translation
Laufen Sie für Götter Willen Lauf=Run for Gods sake Run
- Make sure you read over your posts in future, as there are quite a few mistakes. Particularly at the bottom, when giving "Translations"; it's always crucial you supply the English Meanings clearly.
Otherwise, no one will understand your posts!
~Danny
*EDIT!* YOU MUST REGISTER AN ACCOUNT!
Account E-Mail: Editted Out!
Name:Hainlech Himmler
Nationality:
Germany
What Army will Your Character Serve Beneath?
Nazi/German Army
Character History bio:
Hainlech Himmler born in Berlin,Germany, 1904. His father was a commanding officer of a German platoon in world war one. Hainlech had no occupation before world war two and was studing to become a politician. He also studied English and became fluent.
Hainlech first saw active service at the outbrake of world war two in Poland during the siege of Warsaw and went on to follow in his fathers foot steps and became a Platoon leader.
For his courage at the battle of the Bulge he was rewarded by joining the Ranks of the SS.
When the war ended he hoped to go back to Berlin and become a Politician.
Military Rank:
Corporrall
Writing Sample:
It was a dark moonless night and the rain beat down upon the lone German officer Hainlech Himmler. He crept through the bombed town there did not seem to be a living thing for miles.
It was then he heared the sound of distant voices he was confused he thought he was alone. He could not make out their language but if they were German they may be able to help him. Then a shot rang out followed by a deafening scream.
A wounded German staggered out of a building a sea of blood flowing from his mouth. when Hinlech steeped forward to help he heard a British voice shout "He's wounded lets finish him". As the Brit emerged from the ruined building Hainlech squeezed the trigger of his Mp40 but he cursed as he only heard a click. It was out out of ammunition. The British soldier clubbed the wounded German to with the but of his Lee-Enfield. Hainlech drew his Luger as fast as possible and fired two shots which pierced the enemy's head.
With his last breath of life the German soldier whispered "Laufen Sie für Götter Willen Lauf"! Hainlech ran full pelt away from the scene with other Brits on his tail.
Translation
Laufen Sie für Götter Willen Lauf=Run for Gods sake Run