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[Demetri Ivanov]

Account E-Mail: My accounts name is Ivanov

Name: Demetri

Nationality: Russian


What Army will Your Character Serve Beneath?
UK, US or Soviet: Soviet

Character History:
Before the war Demetri uset to own a cafe in Stalingrad. He had a wife and a child and things were going well for Demetri. But when Stalingrad was raided by the Germans, his house was burned and him, his wife and child ran out of the house. People were running all over the street and gunfire was coming from all corners. His wife was shot and he picked up his son and ran into an alley. A German shot him in the leg and he droped his son. He jumped on his son, hoping to save him. The same German that shot him, pulled Demetri of his son and hit Demetri in the face his the stock of his gun. Demetri was knocked out. The next day, he woke up to his dead son lying next to him, Demetri got up and ran out of town and never looked back. He found a red army camp outside of Stalingrad and joined them, hoping to get revenge

Military Rank:
Ryadovi


Writing Sample:
Demetri walked with his fellow comrade, patrolling Stalingrad`s streets "so, how did you get in this mess?" Demetri`s fellow comrade said. "The Germans killed my family, burned down my house, and burned down my cafe." "I`m sorry for your loss" the other soldier said. "It`s fine, how did you get in this mess?" "I was driving to work the day Stalingrad was attacked and all of a sudden, shots started goinging off , buildings were burning and before I could even think, I was shot in the shoulder." "I jumped out of my car and my car ran into a nearby shop." "It just happened so fast, you know Demetri?" "Yeah" Demetri said. A shot rang out and hit Demetri`s friend in the head. "Damn!" Demetri yelled. There was a German 30 feet away. "Go to hell!" Demetri roared while firing his ppsh at the German. The German soldier fell to the ground after being shot 3 times. Six Russian soldiers rushed to Demetri "what happened!?" One of the soldiers yelled "a German attacked us, I managed to kill him though." "We got to go, grab his rifle and lets go, he wont need it anymore." Demetri picked up his fallen comrades rifle, a tear went down Demetri`s eye.

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EDIT FROM CHARACTER HISTORY:

Before the war Demetri uset to own a cafe in Stalingrad. He had a wife and a child and things were going well for Demetri. But when Stalingrad was raided by the Germans, his house was burned and him, his wife and child ran out of the house. People were running all over the street and gunfire was coming from all corners. His wife was shot and he picked up his son and ran into an alley. A German shot him in the leg and he droped his son. He jumped on his son, hoping to save him. The same German that shot him, pulled Demetri of his son and hit Demetri in the face his the stock of his gun. Demetri was knocked out. The next day, he woke up to his dead son lying next to him, He ran out of the alley to see a sea of dead body`s. Demetri looked around, no one was left alive he kept thinking to himself "why did that German leave me alive?" There were two German soldiers patrolling, Demetri layed on the ground as quickly as possible. They were looting, taking things from the dead and checking all the pockets. They finally reached him, one of them checked Demetri`s pockets. Demetri flinched and grabed the German`s hand that was in his pocket and punched him in the face. Demetri grabed his gun and shot him in the leg. The other German was pointing his gun at Demetri, Demetri pointed his gun at him. The two stared at each other for only a moment but to Demetri it felt like a year. Demetri finally shot the German, droped his gun, and ran out of town. While running Demetri could hear the screams of pain from the German he shot in the leg. He found a red army camp outside of Stalingrad and joined them, hoping to get revenge.

[Demetri Ivanov]

EDIT to my name: I forgot to put my full name on the app. My characters full name is Demetri Ivanov. LOL

[Edward"Butcher"McMillan]

I know it sounds rather trivial, but I've never let anyone else slide and I won't start now, your writing sample falls short of the 15 line minimum, gonna have to beef it up a bit before you can be accepted.

-JT

[Demetri Ivanov]

EDIT to my writing sample this time:


Demetri walked with his fellow comrade, patrolling Stalingrad`s streets "so, how did you get in this mess?" Demetri`s fellow comrade said. "The Germans killed my family, burned down my house, and burned down my cafe." "I`m sorry for your loss" the other soldier said. "It`s fine, how did you get in this mess?" "I was driving to work the day Stalingrad was attacked and all of a sudden, shots started goinging off , buildings were burning and before I could even think, I was shot in the shoulder." "I jumped out of my car and my car ran into a nearby shop." "It just happened so fast, you know Demetri?" "Yeah" Demetri said. A shot rang out and hit Demetri`s friend in the head. "Damn!" Demetri yelled. There was a German 30 feet away. "Go to hell!" Demetri roared while firing his Mosin Nagant at the German. The German soldier fell to the ground after being shot 3 times. Six Russian soldiers rushed to Demetri "what happened!?" One of the soldiers yelled "a German attacked us, I managed to kill him though." "We got to go, grab his rifle and lets go, he wont need it anymore." Demetri picked up his fallen comrades rifle, a tear went down Demetri`s eye. When the soldiers went back to their camp it was around 10:30 pm and most of the camp was asleep. Demetri went to the sleeping tent, put his things under his rather small bed and layed down under the covers. "I thought only the bad people go to hell, I guess I was wrong. The next day at around 6:00 pm Demetri heard gunfire and screams. He got up and grabed his Mosin Nagant from under his bed and ran outside. Outside Demetri could see around 30 Germans and countless Red army soldiers running out of tents. A bullet wised past Demetri, Demetri ducked to the ground and started to crawl tword some open fields were most of the fighting was going on. A German came around the corner of tents and aimed his rifle at Demetri. Thankfully, a Russian soldier shot that German "stop eating the dirt and start fighting!" the Russian soldier yelled. Demetri got up and ran to the fields. A German tank came out of some trees followed by some more Germans. A Russian soldier shot at the tank with his panzershreck. It opened up the tank like a knife goes threw butter. The Germans then retreated, the Russian soldiers screamed with joy.

[Edward"Butcher"McMillan]

Welcome to Issuing Orders. I'm accepting your app at the rank of Ryadovi.

If you have any questions please feel free to browse around the "Beginner's Area" and if you can't find the answers you are looking for thne by all means please ask myself or any other staff member. There are also a lot of veteran members around if there happens to be no staff at the moment.

Again, welcome to Issuing Orders, I hope you enjoy your time here

-JT