Post by IG141a on Apr 14, 2008 14:00:44 GMT
Denied,
Lack of writing style and un-imaginative.
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Name: John Smith
Country: UK
Army: UK
Rank: Private
History: John was born in 1924. His family was poor so he had leave school early and had to work at a shop to make money for two years. Then he joined the army in 1940.
Mission: John walked forwards. It was January and it was cold. He took a swig of his vodka then dropped the bottle because it was empty. His feet crunched the snow. He heard a sound. He turned around and looked at the trees. He fired 20 bullets at each then walked to them. Behind one was a dead nazi. He smiled. Hed killed somebody again.
Lack of writing style and un-imaginative.
Email.; Edited Out!
Name: John Smith
Country: UK
Army: UK
Rank: Private
History: John was born in 1924. His family was poor so he had leave school early and had to work at a shop to make money for two years. Then he joined the army in 1940.
Mission: John walked forwards. It was January and it was cold. He took a swig of his vodka then dropped the bottle because it was empty. His feet crunched the snow. He heard a sound. He turned around and looked at the trees. He fired 20 bullets at each then walked to them. Behind one was a dead nazi. He smiled. Hed killed somebody again.