Post by Erdmann Hoesslein on Jun 6, 2009 3:11:02 GMT
I first want you to know that I moved this to the neutral area, where it should have been originally, as you told me this was a medic, so I read and learned as well. The rank you asked for is a bit high, first off I'm not counting the translations against you as I know you may be thinking I will. There were multiple misspellings and grammer errors, not to mention you misspelled your own characters name on multiple occasions. Sanitätsunterfeldwebel is what I think is best.
-JT
Account E-Mail: (This is Ben Shirley =D) EDITED OUT!
Name: Erdmann Hoesslein
Nationality:
- German
What Army will Your Character Serve Beneath?
Nazi/German Army is the Only Option at The Moment:
Nazi
Character History:
Born about 20 years before the grand military war called World War Two, there was World War 1. Erdmann was working in this time period, and everyone knew it was called the "Great Depression". Everyone started going poor, and businesses were now taking huge loans and getting enormous problems that they couldn't solve by themselves. Erdmann worked night and day for his mother who was very sick, and she needed the money for her medicines. Her son was supportive through the whole ordeal and Erdmann was by her side every step of the way.
By the time he was 15, he had been working for 10 years. Even though he was working at the age of 5, he had done good. He had much experience and he was still learning. As working as a boy who sells delicious foods on the street, to shining shoes, and also cleaning windshields, he did good and better than any other German boy that was around his age at the time. He was happy, and so was his mother as she knew her son was working hard for her to be well.
Everytime he went to the hospital and seeing the doctors treat his mother, he wondered about what they were doing. He had asked several questions about the medicines and procedures that they were using and his questions were always answered. Although they were complex answers, he was fascinated by the ideas and by the medicine field. Once he became around the age of 22 or so, he got enlisted into the basic Medical Program that the hospital currently had. He learned quickly and his mom became his patient. He learned to take care of her, to use the medical items correctly and how they were supposed to be applied, and he was also treated with respect.
After a few years, when he was 26, war started. The call for duty was made and all of the young and athletic Germans moved fast towards the recruiting camps and booths. Erdmann was eager to try his hand at war, and he was prepared to face the adventures. His mother had warned him several times about how dangerous war is, but he just kept telling her that he only did it for a adventure. In January of 1941 in Berlin, Adolf Hitler showed himself onto a high podium and he looked across the whole entire crowd of inspired Germans before looking down on his paper and he began to speak.
"Ich werde überzeugt in diesem 1941 wird das entscheidende Jahr einer großen Neuen Ordnung in Europa sein. Die Welt soll für jeden öffnen. Vorzüge für Personen, die Tyrannei von bestimmten Nationen und ihren Finanzlinealen sollen fallen. Und letzt dieses ganzen Jahres wird helfen, die Fundamente eines echten Verstehens unter Völkern, und damit die Gewißheit der Versöhnung unter Nationen zur Verfügung zu stellen.... Jene Nationen, die noch uns entgegengesetzt sind, wird eines Tages den größeren Feind innerhalb dessen anerkennen. Dann werden sie sich uns darin anschließen," said Hitler. Erdmann listened to his great speech that rocked the very foundation of Erdmann's mind and the way he looked at the world. It was changed and he now he knew why he went to war, To show the pride of the Germans.
Once Erdmann was accepted into the army, he set out to find the Medical Ward and join their ranks. He was not going to be a tank and try to act like he is the only one that can kill the filthy Allied side, no, he knew he needed some friends to accomplish such a incredible feat. He knew that being a Medic, people depended on you to heal their injuries and such. With this kind of trust, he could easily gain allies and surely be able to have a elite force that could be the backbone of the army. He of course needed some Medical experienced soldiers so they could assist with such operations that a Medic couldn't do by himself. A helping hand was always useful.
He was enrolled in the army with the rank of SS-Rottenführer. Through the first year of his service in the army, he worked mostly with the wounded soldiers that came home or into the base. Sometimes, if the risk was high, he was sent with a platoon or two full of soldiers to make sure their operation went well and the injuries to a minimum. He was very successful in doing these things, and this is what earned him a promotion to SS-Unterscharführer.
He was sent to the front lines of Russia, then to Africa, and then finally settling near the lines of France and Normandy, he continued saving lives with his vast knowledge of medical procedures and medical items. He was also great with the higher ranking officers, thus, he had gained much more respect with the soldiers of lower rank. He had accomplished many things in his life, as help his platoon get out of a pinch. The only reason they were out was because of Erdmann, and of his excellent agile hands that fixed up the wound and made the soldier ready for battle. He was awarded another Promotion, straight to SS-Hauptscharführer.
Military Rank:
- SS-Hauptscharführer Or any other rank you seem fit
Writing Sample:
Scenario: You’re alone behind enemy lines and you get the eerie feeling someone’s watching you. You’re trying to remain quiet, stay low, work your way back to the frontlines - but you can’t help but feel you’re being followed… (How does your character React? What’s running through their mind?)
-JT
Account E-Mail: (This is Ben Shirley =D) EDITED OUT!
Name: Erdmann Hoesslein
Nationality:
- German
What Army will Your Character Serve Beneath?
Nazi/German Army is the Only Option at The Moment:
Nazi
Character History:
Born about 20 years before the grand military war called World War Two, there was World War 1. Erdmann was working in this time period, and everyone knew it was called the "Great Depression". Everyone started going poor, and businesses were now taking huge loans and getting enormous problems that they couldn't solve by themselves. Erdmann worked night and day for his mother who was very sick, and she needed the money for her medicines. Her son was supportive through the whole ordeal and Erdmann was by her side every step of the way.
By the time he was 15, he had been working for 10 years. Even though he was working at the age of 5, he had done good. He had much experience and he was still learning. As working as a boy who sells delicious foods on the street, to shining shoes, and also cleaning windshields, he did good and better than any other German boy that was around his age at the time. He was happy, and so was his mother as she knew her son was working hard for her to be well.
Everytime he went to the hospital and seeing the doctors treat his mother, he wondered about what they were doing. He had asked several questions about the medicines and procedures that they were using and his questions were always answered. Although they were complex answers, he was fascinated by the ideas and by the medicine field. Once he became around the age of 22 or so, he got enlisted into the basic Medical Program that the hospital currently had. He learned quickly and his mom became his patient. He learned to take care of her, to use the medical items correctly and how they were supposed to be applied, and he was also treated with respect.
After a few years, when he was 26, war started. The call for duty was made and all of the young and athletic Germans moved fast towards the recruiting camps and booths. Erdmann was eager to try his hand at war, and he was prepared to face the adventures. His mother had warned him several times about how dangerous war is, but he just kept telling her that he only did it for a adventure. In January of 1941 in Berlin, Adolf Hitler showed himself onto a high podium and he looked across the whole entire crowd of inspired Germans before looking down on his paper and he began to speak.
"Ich werde überzeugt in diesem 1941 wird das entscheidende Jahr einer großen Neuen Ordnung in Europa sein. Die Welt soll für jeden öffnen. Vorzüge für Personen, die Tyrannei von bestimmten Nationen und ihren Finanzlinealen sollen fallen. Und letzt dieses ganzen Jahres wird helfen, die Fundamente eines echten Verstehens unter Völkern, und damit die Gewißheit der Versöhnung unter Nationen zur Verfügung zu stellen.... Jene Nationen, die noch uns entgegengesetzt sind, wird eines Tages den größeren Feind innerhalb dessen anerkennen. Dann werden sie sich uns darin anschließen," said Hitler. Erdmann listened to his great speech that rocked the very foundation of Erdmann's mind and the way he looked at the world. It was changed and he now he knew why he went to war, To show the pride of the Germans.
Once Erdmann was accepted into the army, he set out to find the Medical Ward and join their ranks. He was not going to be a tank and try to act like he is the only one that can kill the filthy Allied side, no, he knew he needed some friends to accomplish such a incredible feat. He knew that being a Medic, people depended on you to heal their injuries and such. With this kind of trust, he could easily gain allies and surely be able to have a elite force that could be the backbone of the army. He of course needed some Medical experienced soldiers so they could assist with such operations that a Medic couldn't do by himself. A helping hand was always useful.
He was enrolled in the army with the rank of SS-Rottenführer. Through the first year of his service in the army, he worked mostly with the wounded soldiers that came home or into the base. Sometimes, if the risk was high, he was sent with a platoon or two full of soldiers to make sure their operation went well and the injuries to a minimum. He was very successful in doing these things, and this is what earned him a promotion to SS-Unterscharführer.
He was sent to the front lines of Russia, then to Africa, and then finally settling near the lines of France and Normandy, he continued saving lives with his vast knowledge of medical procedures and medical items. He was also great with the higher ranking officers, thus, he had gained much more respect with the soldiers of lower rank. He had accomplished many things in his life, as help his platoon get out of a pinch. The only reason they were out was because of Erdmann, and of his excellent agile hands that fixed up the wound and made the soldier ready for battle. He was awarded another Promotion, straight to SS-Hauptscharführer.
Military Rank:
- SS-Hauptscharführer Or any other rank you seem fit
Writing Sample:
Scenario: You’re alone behind enemy lines and you get the eerie feeling someone’s watching you. You’re trying to remain quiet, stay low, work your way back to the frontlines - but you can’t help but feel you’re being followed… (How does your character React? What’s running through their mind?)