New Plot [Smaller]

[Mac Bargett]

Perhaps PuNk! might want his gang to do the kidnapping.

If you didn't know Raf, Liam started the Jackals, a lawless gang within the Desert Rats that goes around doing violent things.

Great minds think alike. I suggested something like that in the C-Box when Raf first started talking about it.

[Edward"Butcher"McMillan]

Well I see no reason the three of us can't have a nice thread together, an inspection of sorts (that is what you listed in your journal) and when it's over and you and Erik leave, then you get captured and continue on in a new thread from there. Works, and Erik, fair warning, if you do decide to enter this thread with us...I'm gonna give you some crap about that lung it's on of my favorite moments

-JT

Pretty much the idea, I suggested. And I don't mind it JT. But I made it so that it healed perfectly (which I researched that a lung could 100% recover from a bullet wound), so I didn't have to deal with lung problems in future hostile battles.

[∬: Rafael Z. Wolfram]

Yeah Erik did suggest that to me, but I wasn't sure, thinking about it, could make sense? Is Liam still searching for Edward? Do they even know he's alive yet? Either way, I suppose they could use my idea to get information or even find out about Edward McMillan being alive maybe.

Only problem is, for Erik that is, he would have to pick a side. I heard he's Liam's new little toy, so he could either be with Liam or with me in the slums of a cell. It's just a flaunting idea anyway, would be nice to role play with Danny, I've been on this website as long as he has and I have never role played with him. I'm sure I can trust an Admin to not cut cut my arms off and go removing my tongue. Possible I guess.

So is Liam insane now or something? I did want someone with bit of an edge, reason to do what I want them to do with Wolfram. Like the carving of the thunderbolt into his face. Come to think of it, me and Danny are supposed to be new arch rivals anyway, with the Epic battle (if it's still alive), the last battle where we clash.

Could work out nicely. For now however, who wants to start our thread JT? Or Erik?
- Raf

[Edward"Butcher"McMillan]

YEs Liam has totally gone insane, he now knows Edward is alive and in the service of the Axis forces, dunno if he belives the "by choise" part yet or not. Colly ended up running into me and reported back to Liam, I say make Erik start it, he's the youngest

The Epic Campaign...well...dunno really...ask Strum.

-JT

[∬: Rafael Z. Wolfram]

Oh, wow? LOL! Missed a few important things I see. Ok well, let's do our thread first and I will tackle this being captured plot afterwards or during our thread even, whatever works best.
- Raf

[∬: Erik Schneider]

So wait, am I making the thread than? Where should it take place? And I take it we aren't getting captured yet than?

P.S. Tyler hasn't been introduced to the Jackals yet, so if we do this nowish, he wouldn't have a reason to be kidnapping Wolfie with Liam out of nowhere.

[Nicholas Ealing]

Nicholas could always take his place. Obviously, he's in the 3ID but he's been introduced to Brentwood and is almost as quietly messed up in the head as the good ole' Captain.

O' course, one scary interrogator would probably be more than enough and I don't think anyone fits the bill better than Brenty.

[∬: Erhard Strumfelder]

Just wanting to feel included, but eventually you're going to have to freed/rescued from these dogs, which is a role I'd personally like to fulfil. I can fit in around everything that's going on before it, being flexible.

What sort of rescue do you want? SS troops surround the building and storm it, killing anyone who stands in their way? Or more covert, where just a few men bust in, get you out of your cells and get way in a car, but maybe a car chase follows?

[∬: Rafael Z. Wolfram]

I can start the thread if not Erik, it's no major hassle (major hassle, get it? -snorts-). So we shall start with our neutral thread Erik, JT, as Addie mentioned earlier, bit of a prologue thread and plus, I feel it's about time Edward McMillan came face to face with Wolfram on terms of a mutual meeting.

Should be fun...

This whole being captured scenario needs a lot of refurbishment, to begin with, we're including Brentwood when he hasn't even been asked and also, the finer details of what's to conclude from this plot. My main aim is to roughen up Wolfram, sure he has forgotten about his son and gotten over the grieving process a good deal, but I still feel there is a wisp of misunderstanding in the air and people still feel Wolfram is cut up inside. What a better way then to cut Wolfram up physically and show he's a stronger character than most think he may be?

The main idea of this plot for me, is to show that Wolfram is a changed man and physically, with my character's body, I feel I can only show this mental change by making a physical change. Hence the scars he'll get.

It should also build a stronger bond with Erik, possibly Edward McMillan if he wants to be captured too? Would really make an exciting twist if Liam got his hands on him.

The rescue scenario Strumfelder is wide open, I would be happy for you to play the knight in shining armour, as this was your role before hand right? How you wish to do it, is completely up to you, I'm going to allow you to have a bit of fun with this plotting and whatever you feel would be best to save Wolfram and Co' from whomever will be holding them captive, I shall leave up to you. If you would like a car chase, then that sounds great, if you would like to go in guns blazing, then that also sounds great.

You have to remember, the Allied member playing the capturer will have to escape alive, so you can't really come in with a whole army behind you. They wouldn't realistically stand a chance of escaping. Just to clarify to everyone, I wanted to keep this plot really small and simple, but important and effective for those whom are involved;

- Liam; Capturer
- Wolfram & Erik; Captives (possibly JT too? Optional)
- Strumfelder; Rescuer

So the line up for this storyline already has four, possibly five members involved. More than enough in my eyes. The main threads could be cut into two halves or grouped into one large thread, this is what I was thinking:

- Wolfram, Erik & Liam () in the first thread. Get beaten about, interrorgated?, the opening thread for their capture.

- Wolfram & Erik, we could do a quiet thread together within the holding cells? Pass some time, make it look as if we have been there for an entire week already or a few days. Have some heart to heart moments. Get to know one another on a personal level, without the superiority factor of being officers get into the way, as it would in normal threads.

- Wolfram, Erik & Liam () take part in the last thread, perhaps Liam () could be getting more daring and this is where he carves into Wolfram's face perhaps? Whatever damage you wish to take Erik, the worst of it could be done in this thread too. To just to make it look as if the two are on death's door, then towards the end of the thread, Strumfelder can emerge...

Now, we can include the escape/fire-fight scene for this thread, or start another one. Completely depends upon the final verdict of a car chase, long fire-fight, or a simple scaring off the capturers who'll flee. Something we can talk about when we get an official Allied member to play the sadistic torturer.

- Raf

[∬: Erik Schneider]

That all sounds good to me, Raf. I think you should start the thread as you will be leading this inspection. And by the end we can get captured or just spice it up some other way.

The plot sounds pretty good to me and I wouldn't mine getting beaten up or scarred either. Maybe some facial scar/marking or something on his chest?

[∬: Rafael Z. Wolfram]

Well just make your mind up about the damage assesment of your character when we get Liam on board or another Allied fanatic to do the deed. Just needs to be someone powerful or even crazy enough to be my new arch rival, I've had time to think about it and Liam seems like the best candidate in my opinion. Don't think Patterson would be sadistic enough to carve into a major's face.

I will get our thread up later or by tomorrow if not JT and Erik. Unless one of yous beat me too it.
- Raf