Post by Alf spencer application on Apr 15, 2009 11:33:34 GMT
I can see that you have writing talent, but I do need you to lengthen this app a bit before I accept you. The minimum standard for RP posts here is 15 lines and I'd prefer if you added on another small paragraph to your history as well.
~Dan
Account E-Mail: Kylefitz@hotmail.co.uk
Name: Alfred Spencer
Nationality: British
What Army will Your Character Serve Beneath?
UK
Character History:
Born in January 18th 1918 to John and Mary Spencer in the City of Sheffield. Alf as he prefers to be called lived out his early years as the son of a wealthy Steel works owning family. He was soon noticed as an intelligent confident teen and was sent to grammar school were his particular interest were German and English his skill in writing was well known. He started university and was studying journalism when at the age of 22 the war started he signed up immediately to the horror of his parents. All Alf life The military fascinated him yet his tyrannical mother would not hear of him signing up. he has a immense talent for linguistics especially German which he can speak to the point that he has no foreign accent
Military Rank:
Private
Writing Sample:
The rain dripped of the gutter. Alf brain was racing first he thought get inside a building he was walking along a muddy track as he usually did when devoid of company he muttered to himself in German it was a way of detaching himself from a problem when A voice rang out "Name und Rang Soldat ." quickly Alf replied
"Alfred herr Obergrenadier Alfred."
"Zigarette Alfred." the German replied seemingly pleased with his answer
"Danke herr." Alf said quickly the makings of a plan forming in his mind the German approached and quietly Alfred knocked him out with a Punch to the head he stripped the man of his uniform and gun "now to work my way back to the line," he said slowly to himself.
Sorry had no time to lengthen it out because I created an account before posting this like an idiot.
~Dan
Account E-Mail: Kylefitz@hotmail.co.uk
Name: Alfred Spencer
Nationality: British
What Army will Your Character Serve Beneath?
UK
Character History:
Born in January 18th 1918 to John and Mary Spencer in the City of Sheffield. Alf as he prefers to be called lived out his early years as the son of a wealthy Steel works owning family. He was soon noticed as an intelligent confident teen and was sent to grammar school were his particular interest were German and English his skill in writing was well known. He started university and was studying journalism when at the age of 22 the war started he signed up immediately to the horror of his parents. All Alf life The military fascinated him yet his tyrannical mother would not hear of him signing up. he has a immense talent for linguistics especially German which he can speak to the point that he has no foreign accent
Military Rank:
Private
Writing Sample:
The rain dripped of the gutter. Alf brain was racing first he thought get inside a building he was walking along a muddy track as he usually did when devoid of company he muttered to himself in German it was a way of detaching himself from a problem when A voice rang out "Name und Rang Soldat ." quickly Alf replied
"Alfred herr Obergrenadier Alfred."
"Zigarette Alfred." the German replied seemingly pleased with his answer
"Danke herr." Alf said quickly the makings of a plan forming in his mind the German approached and quietly Alfred knocked him out with a Punch to the head he stripped the man of his uniform and gun "now to work my way back to the line," he said slowly to himself.
Sorry had no time to lengthen it out because I created an account before posting this like an idiot.