Post by franzwalter on Mar 25, 2009 21:59:26 GMT
Info:
Username:franzwalter
Character name: Franz Walters
Wanted rank: private,please
Army will serve under: Nazi/Axis
History:
Franz was born in a small cottage, with a brother.Franz's house was broken into when he was 12.He fought the burglar.He hit the robber with a hammer twice.Then he pulled out a knife and made him KOed.When the burglar awoke,Franz was armed with the family shotgun."Please! don't shoot!" the robber begged.Franz wasn't a fool, he saw that robber reaching for a knife.Boom!Franz tore his leg off.The cops said Franz did good not killing the burglar.Unfortuntally,Franz's one brother was killed in combat, and missing.They were both put on Franz's brother's record.Franz then snuck out to the army with his other brother.
Writing Sample
Franz was walking around,holding his Kar98.He started polishing it when he felt as if being watched."What the hell..."Franz said in a questioing voice.Franz treked over the fields."Damn, Im hungry."Franz said.He went over and knocked on the door.An old lady opened up."Oh.Um, hello.My name is Franz,German army.May I have a piece of bread?"Franz asked."W-why sure."Tthe woman said."Ohhh, one minute."The women struggled to get to her kitchen."Can I help with anything?" Franz asked."W-Well, I have a small leak,and th-that dang plumber won't come!"The old woman studdered alot."Well, I can fix that."Franz worked on the sink that was leaking.Badly.He sat outside on the womans porch.she smoked a long pipe.All of a sudden,4 americans walked up aiming at the old woman."We are here to raid your house.Show us all your money.NOW!"The captains voice roured.Franz aimed his Kar and fired at the captain, the only idiot with a gun.The captain flew to the ground.The other 3 raised their hands and surrended.He shot two.He made the last one burry them.Then Franz made him dig his own grave.Litterly.Franz kicked the last soldier in and shot him.Then, Franz burried the the soldier."W-well thank you.I-I think you got that bread!"Franz helped the woman get the bread.He even split it with her.Then Franz packed up his gear,said Thank you, and said he will visit sometime again, and left.
Username:franzwalter
Character name: Franz Walters
Wanted rank: private,please
Army will serve under: Nazi/Axis
History:
Franz was born in a small cottage, with a brother.Franz's house was broken into when he was 12.He fought the burglar.He hit the robber with a hammer twice.Then he pulled out a knife and made him KOed.When the burglar awoke,Franz was armed with the family shotgun."Please! don't shoot!" the robber begged.Franz wasn't a fool, he saw that robber reaching for a knife.Boom!Franz tore his leg off.The cops said Franz did good not killing the burglar.Unfortuntally,Franz's one brother was killed in combat, and missing.They were both put on Franz's brother's record.Franz then snuck out to the army with his other brother.
Writing Sample
Franz was walking around,holding his Kar98.He started polishing it when he felt as if being watched."What the hell..."Franz said in a questioing voice.Franz treked over the fields."Damn, Im hungry."Franz said.He went over and knocked on the door.An old lady opened up."Oh.Um, hello.My name is Franz,German army.May I have a piece of bread?"Franz asked."W-why sure."Tthe woman said."Ohhh, one minute."The women struggled to get to her kitchen."Can I help with anything?" Franz asked."W-Well, I have a small leak,and th-that dang plumber won't come!"The old woman studdered alot."Well, I can fix that."Franz worked on the sink that was leaking.Badly.He sat outside on the womans porch.she smoked a long pipe.All of a sudden,4 americans walked up aiming at the old woman."We are here to raid your house.Show us all your money.NOW!"The captains voice roured.Franz aimed his Kar and fired at the captain, the only idiot with a gun.The captain flew to the ground.The other 3 raised their hands and surrended.He shot two.He made the last one burry them.Then Franz made him dig his own grave.Litterly.Franz kicked the last soldier in and shot him.Then, Franz burried the the soldier."W-well thank you.I-I think you got that bread!"Franz helped the woman get the bread.He even split it with her.Then Franz packed up his gear,said Thank you, and said he will visit sometime again, and left.