Post by Felix Von Trautmannsdorf on Oct 19, 2008 12:45:01 GMT
Accepted, although not at the rank you requested. There are already at least 3 active members of the rank you requested and you have received the rank of SS-Scharführer instead.
~Dan
Account E-Mail: joe_charlton@hotmail.com
Name: Felix Von Trautmannsdorf
Nationality: Austrian
Nazi/German Army -
What Army will Your Character Serve Beneath?
Nazi/German Army is the Only Option at The Moment: 500. SS-Fallschirmjägerbatallion
Character History:
Born in the Austrian village of Trautmannsdorf on April the fifteenth in the year of 1919 as the son of the local count, Felix had a life of plenty most of his life with his own servants and tutor, the early years were easy as his tutor discovered his natural intelligence and proceeded to teach him maths and science which would usually be taught to to children three or four years his senior and passed all the tests put before him with distinction. at the age of seven he took up the flute and quickly proceeded to a grade five at the age of ten, the great depression began and Felix's family quickly had to sell their mansion overlooking Trautmannsdorf and seek accommodation in Berlin and ended up in a spacious flat in one of the richer areas of the city. this was one of the hardest parts of Felix's childhood because all of his friends and servants had to leave or be left behind and in the strange city of Berlin, he knew no-one. then, passing with distinction in maths and science
at the age of eighteen, Felix joined the 500. SS-Fallschirmjägerbatallion and because of his noble upbringing he was granted training for the position of Oberstabsfeldwebel. learning his responsibilities quickly Felix grew into his rank and when the war began was sent off to war with a platoon of his own.
Military Rank: Oberstabsfeldwebel
Writing Sample:
Felix ran through the forest brush and made his way toward his platoon which, by the way in which they jumped out of the plane, where not far away, why did the wind have to turn against him as he jumped out, blowing him away from the others. suddenly, Felix heard a twig snap behind him and dived for cover as he pulled his pistol from it's holster and pointed it in the vicinity of where the sound had come from. not noticing where Felix had hidden himself, an American soldier lumbered into sight and started to search the area. obviously a patrol and the soldier was obviously a recruit by the way he lumbered around, it would be easy to kill this idiot, carefully Felix aimed his pistol at the American and shot him in the chest. breaking cover immediately he ran in the direction that he thought his platoon was in. breaking into a clearing, he immediately felt 5 rifles trained onto him which almost immediately left him as his platoon recognized him, "now," Felix said "let's cause some havoc" and, taking his rifle from scorch, the explosive's expert proceeded back towards the enemy lines and the actual target for their mission.
breaking out of the woods Felix and his man drew weapons as they headed for their target, the American supply line, as they drew closer to the bridge that formed a key part of the supply line, Scorch prepared some of his explosives; checking them for faults which would either cause them to go off too early or not at all. as the bridge came into sight, Felix and his men started to crawl, a necessary precaution as the American's probably had search lights to light up intruders. reaching the bridge seemed like it took forever and setting the explosives to the wooden planking seemed like it took forever but, finally, it was done and Felix's group set the timers and ran as far away as they could in the short time that they had to run, as expected, the explosion was sufficient to cover their retreat into the woods where they would melt away like ghosts. smiling to himself, Felix congratulated himself on a job well done, hopefully all the other missions would be like this, simple, easy and hard hitting, but you can never count on it.
~Dan
Account E-Mail: joe_charlton@hotmail.com
Name: Felix Von Trautmannsdorf
Nationality: Austrian
Nazi/German Army -
What Army will Your Character Serve Beneath?
Nazi/German Army is the Only Option at The Moment: 500. SS-Fallschirmjägerbatallion
Character History:
Born in the Austrian village of Trautmannsdorf on April the fifteenth in the year of 1919 as the son of the local count, Felix had a life of plenty most of his life with his own servants and tutor, the early years were easy as his tutor discovered his natural intelligence and proceeded to teach him maths and science which would usually be taught to to children three or four years his senior and passed all the tests put before him with distinction. at the age of seven he took up the flute and quickly proceeded to a grade five at the age of ten, the great depression began and Felix's family quickly had to sell their mansion overlooking Trautmannsdorf and seek accommodation in Berlin and ended up in a spacious flat in one of the richer areas of the city. this was one of the hardest parts of Felix's childhood because all of his friends and servants had to leave or be left behind and in the strange city of Berlin, he knew no-one. then, passing with distinction in maths and science
at the age of eighteen, Felix joined the 500. SS-Fallschirmjägerbatallion and because of his noble upbringing he was granted training for the position of Oberstabsfeldwebel. learning his responsibilities quickly Felix grew into his rank and when the war began was sent off to war with a platoon of his own.
Military Rank: Oberstabsfeldwebel
Writing Sample:
Felix ran through the forest brush and made his way toward his platoon which, by the way in which they jumped out of the plane, where not far away, why did the wind have to turn against him as he jumped out, blowing him away from the others. suddenly, Felix heard a twig snap behind him and dived for cover as he pulled his pistol from it's holster and pointed it in the vicinity of where the sound had come from. not noticing where Felix had hidden himself, an American soldier lumbered into sight and started to search the area. obviously a patrol and the soldier was obviously a recruit by the way he lumbered around, it would be easy to kill this idiot, carefully Felix aimed his pistol at the American and shot him in the chest. breaking cover immediately he ran in the direction that he thought his platoon was in. breaking into a clearing, he immediately felt 5 rifles trained onto him which almost immediately left him as his platoon recognized him, "now," Felix said "let's cause some havoc" and, taking his rifle from scorch, the explosive's expert proceeded back towards the enemy lines and the actual target for their mission.
breaking out of the woods Felix and his man drew weapons as they headed for their target, the American supply line, as they drew closer to the bridge that formed a key part of the supply line, Scorch prepared some of his explosives; checking them for faults which would either cause them to go off too early or not at all. as the bridge came into sight, Felix and his men started to crawl, a necessary precaution as the American's probably had search lights to light up intruders. reaching the bridge seemed like it took forever and setting the explosives to the wooden planking seemed like it took forever but, finally, it was done and Felix's group set the timers and ran as far away as they could in the short time that they had to run, as expected, the explosion was sufficient to cover their retreat into the woods where they would melt away like ghosts. smiling to himself, Felix congratulated himself on a job well done, hopefully all the other missions would be like this, simple, easy and hard hitting, but you can never count on it.