Post by Werwolf on Jun 24, 2008 16:46:20 GMT
Denied/Accepted?
I do know your writing quality and style Golodkowski, but this is a character application and you've turned this into a Division plea at the same time. Hmm.
I'm happy to accept your character, but the Divisional suggestion sounds odd. Being a Resistance group, doesn't entirely allow you the freedom of Role Playing in the Neutral Areas if you're not apart of any Military basis properly, but just a resistance group?
All I can say is, becoming this 'Troop Commander' makes you a Lieutenant of sorts to your Resistance Division, but seeing as there isn't any equivilant ranking ladders to your Division - You will most likely be exempt from earning anymore ranks. As there isn't any higher than a troop commander you appointed.
If you're happy with these terms, I'll accept your character, otherwise I'd suggest changing your App' around a bit to meet the requirements of a Military Personal Unit and creating a proper Military Division if you're seeking the terms of promotions and etc... Hope this is making enough sense?
~Danny
Account email: bolshevik@live.co.uk
Name: Dietrich Stahl
Nationality: German
Organisation: Werwolfs*
Character History: Stahl had a mysterious background, hailing from a Warendorf orphanage. Leaving in 1934, at the age of fourteen, he began a life in the gutter, when he was unable to find work. Having no direction in his life, he turned to drink, until he decided to join the Hitler Youth, after he was arrested by the Kripo.
Having nothing else in his life, he became devoted to the organisation, and decided to join the SS at age twenty three. After he was captured serving in Normandy by American forces of the 1st Infantry, he was transported to Brittan. He was able to escape his POW camp and worked his way down to the south coast, where he paid a fisherman to take him to Haarlemmermeer.
He them travelled through the Netherlands back to Germany. He became an immediate candidate for the new German resistance, a branch of the SS known as the Werwolfs. He excelled and fought his way up to become the commander of a troop.
Rank: Troop Commander*
Writing sample: This is to be Golorodski’s second character. You’ve already seen my writing and right now I cant be bothered to write a second. Sorry.
*The Werwolfs were a group of trained resistance fighters, used against the Allies. They didn’t have the same ranks. So I’m proposing it runs like this:
Troop Commander (In charge of Division)
Patrol commander (In charge of four men: one patrol. Sergeant)
Veteran Fighter (Corporal)
Fighter (Private)
I’ll create my own division. To avoid any confusion, can we be armed with German weapons.
Is this alright Danny? Thoughts?
I do know your writing quality and style Golodkowski, but this is a character application and you've turned this into a Division plea at the same time. Hmm.
I'm happy to accept your character, but the Divisional suggestion sounds odd. Being a Resistance group, doesn't entirely allow you the freedom of Role Playing in the Neutral Areas if you're not apart of any Military basis properly, but just a resistance group?
All I can say is, becoming this 'Troop Commander' makes you a Lieutenant of sorts to your Resistance Division, but seeing as there isn't any equivilant ranking ladders to your Division - You will most likely be exempt from earning anymore ranks. As there isn't any higher than a troop commander you appointed.
If you're happy with these terms, I'll accept your character, otherwise I'd suggest changing your App' around a bit to meet the requirements of a Military Personal Unit and creating a proper Military Division if you're seeking the terms of promotions and etc... Hope this is making enough sense?
~Danny
Account email: bolshevik@live.co.uk
Name: Dietrich Stahl
Nationality: German
Organisation: Werwolfs*
Character History: Stahl had a mysterious background, hailing from a Warendorf orphanage. Leaving in 1934, at the age of fourteen, he began a life in the gutter, when he was unable to find work. Having no direction in his life, he turned to drink, until he decided to join the Hitler Youth, after he was arrested by the Kripo.
Having nothing else in his life, he became devoted to the organisation, and decided to join the SS at age twenty three. After he was captured serving in Normandy by American forces of the 1st Infantry, he was transported to Brittan. He was able to escape his POW camp and worked his way down to the south coast, where he paid a fisherman to take him to Haarlemmermeer.
He them travelled through the Netherlands back to Germany. He became an immediate candidate for the new German resistance, a branch of the SS known as the Werwolfs. He excelled and fought his way up to become the commander of a troop.
Rank: Troop Commander*
Writing sample: This is to be Golorodski’s second character. You’ve already seen my writing and right now I cant be bothered to write a second. Sorry.
*The Werwolfs were a group of trained resistance fighters, used against the Allies. They didn’t have the same ranks. So I’m proposing it runs like this:
Troop Commander (In charge of Division)
Patrol commander (In charge of four men: one patrol. Sergeant)
Veteran Fighter (Corporal)
Fighter (Private)
I’ll create my own division. To avoid any confusion, can we be armed with German weapons.
Is this alright Danny? Thoughts?