Post by guest SAZIC on Aug 14, 2008 20:26:16 GMT
Uh, well to be honest with you, you are only applying for a private and they aren't know for their ability, but I don't think I can accept this. First off, we have a posting limit for IC that is set at 15 lines, and second, you have to actually write out your actions and thoughts, not state what they would be.
-JT
Account E-Mail: alschuster111@aol.com
Name: Niklas Schuster
Nationality: German
What Army will Your Character Serve Beneath?
Nazi/German Army is the Only Option at The Moment:
Character History: Niklas was born and raised in Germany. Ever sense he was a small boy he has wanted to be a tank commander. At eight-teen he enlisted and is still trying to reach his goal. He strongly believes Germany will win.
Military Rank: Private
Writing Sample:
Scenario: You’re alone behind enemy lines and you get the eerie feeling someone’s watching you. You’re trying to remain quiet, stay low, work your way back to the frontlines - but you can’t help but feel you’re being followed… (How does your character React? What’s running through their mind?)
He thinks there is probably a sniper nearby, wondering why he hasn't been shot yet. He constantly looks around, staying low. He continues towards his goal, but will stop before it to be sure it wont be compromised by his 'feeling'. If he spots anything at a point, he will work his way to it, making it seam he hasn't noticed if he can. Once he has the advantage, he will naturalize his enemy, take any ammo, or useful items, and continue on his way. Knowing he just might have saved his skin by not letting the enemy know what he was doing.
-JT
Account E-Mail: alschuster111@aol.com
Name: Niklas Schuster
Nationality: German
What Army will Your Character Serve Beneath?
Nazi/German Army is the Only Option at The Moment:
Character History: Niklas was born and raised in Germany. Ever sense he was a small boy he has wanted to be a tank commander. At eight-teen he enlisted and is still trying to reach his goal. He strongly believes Germany will win.
Military Rank: Private
Writing Sample:
Scenario: You’re alone behind enemy lines and you get the eerie feeling someone’s watching you. You’re trying to remain quiet, stay low, work your way back to the frontlines - but you can’t help but feel you’re being followed… (How does your character React? What’s running through their mind?)
He thinks there is probably a sniper nearby, wondering why he hasn't been shot yet. He constantly looks around, staying low. He continues towards his goal, but will stop before it to be sure it wont be compromised by his 'feeling'. If he spots anything at a point, he will work his way to it, making it seam he hasn't noticed if he can. Once he has the advantage, he will naturalize his enemy, take any ammo, or useful items, and continue on his way. Knowing he just might have saved his skin by not letting the enemy know what he was doing.