Vito Cassino - WIP

[Vito Cassino]

Account E-Mail:[e-mail]

Name:Vito Cassino

Nationality:
Italian

What Army will Your Character Serve Beneath?: Italian

Character History:
Vito Cassino was born in Naples, Italy in 1922. His father served in World War I but soon died a little after Vito was born, due to a bullet wound in the upper back. He was a very out-going person and made quite a few friends back in the day. He wanted to be like his father, a hero in his eyes.

In 1939 Vito joined the Italian army to be like his father. He wanted to be a respectable man, and this was the only way he thought he could do it. He listened to the radio every night in basic listening to what was happening in the warfront. He admired Hitler for quite a few reasons.

He thought it was amazing how a man like that could have so much power coming straight out of jail. He thought he was a hero of the Germans, and Vito wanted to be a hero of the Italians as well. His plan is to win the hearts of millions, and thats what he was going to do.

Military Rank:

Sottotenete


Writing Sample:
Scenario: Vito was cleaning out his barrel while his allies were dug in trenches all around him. If you looked ahead, all you could see was the tree line and then a few buildings were the allies were supposedly stationed. He didn't mind them at the moment, they wouldn't come out of the hiding place, eh cowards they were.




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[Vito cas]

Account E-Mail:[e-mail]

Name:Vito Cassino

Nationality:
Italian

What Army will Your Character Serve Beneath?: Italian

Character History:
Vito Cassino was born in Naples, Italy in 1922. His father served in World War I but soon died a little after Vito was born, due to a bullet wound in the upper back. He was a very out-going person and made quite a few friends back in the day. He wanted to be like his father, a hero in his eyes.

His life was a little rough while he was growing up. It was just him and his mother, and they weren't the wealthiest family in town. They were, however, well known through the town because of his father. They were respected by all of his neighbors because of their patriotism.

In 1939 Vito joined the Italian army to be like his father. He wanted to be a respectable man, and this was the only way he thought he could do it. He listened to the radio every night in basic listening to what was happening in the warfront. He admired Hitler for quite a few reasons.

He thought it was amazing how a man like that could have so much power coming straight out of jail. He thought he was a hero of the Germans, and Vito wanted to be a hero of the Italians as well. His plan is to win the hearts of millions, and thats what he was going to do.

Military Rank:

Sottotenete


Writing Sample:
Scenario: Vito was cleaning out his barrel while his allies were dug in trenches all around him. If you looked ahead, all you could see was the tree line and then a few buildings were the allies were supposedly stationed. He didn't mind them at the moment, they wouldn't come out of the hiding place, eh cowards they were.

It now became night time and Vito was sitting in his dug-in trench with two other comrade. One was his Sergente, and the other was a brand-new medic brought onto the battlefield. He new something was about to happen, he heard noises from above, and friendly AA guns shooting towards the sky. All you could see was mini-bubble like explosions in the sky, sending pieces of shrapnel towards the snow on the ground.

The noise was deafening to the infantry that were dug in trenches. From all the flak shells exploding in the air, you could see paratroopers dropping fast down towards the ground. The bad thing was, Vitos platoon was just reinforced. That meant over half of their troops were new to combat, and they began to fire towards the paratroops.

The Sgt. started to yell over all the gun fire and explosions. "Cease fire! Cease fire! Your bullets won't reach!" He kept screaming over the chaos that was now being created. Now you could hear whistles being blown, which now meant the allies in the builds were attacking. They kicked open the windows and MG's started to reign hell over the battlefield. Tracer rounds from the MG's were flying every direction, making many of the newly deployed soldiers scared.

The paratroopers now started to land all around the Royal Italian Army. The Sgt. poked his head up and was stabbed in the chest by a enemy bayonet. Vito picked up his Model 38 and shot a whole clip into his chest. The Sgt. fell to the ground as blood started to pour around him, making a puddle in the snow. He tried to whisper something in Vito's ear, but he couldn't understand it. The troops were all going insane, Vito now resumed control of the men.

He started to shout out orders, trying to change the tide of the battle. Friendly tanks started to roll up, tearing up enemy troops with their MG42's. Tanks started to shoot the buildings that the troops were coming from, blowing chunks out of the house. One of the windows got obliterated. Pieces of the building flew everywhere and blood splattered the walls.

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[Nathan Whyte]

Hi V,

Whilst your writing is off a high enough standard, this app is far too short for your requested rank. Officer ranks tend to have a history and RP sample around the 1000 word mark each. At the moment, I would probably give your rank Corporale at a stretch.

So, your options are to re-write, or accept the lower rank. Just post below. If you have any questions, feel free to ask.

Nathan

[v]

Cpl is fine