Post by Guest on Jul 16, 2008 20:17:56 GMT
Although certainly not the longest, your writing skills are good. Accepted.
Account E-Mail:ell_619@hotmail.com
Name:Elliot Watson
Nationality:English
What Army will Your Character Serve Beneath?
UK
Character History:
Born in Manchester UK, Elliot was born into typical armed forces family. His Dad was a soldier and his older brother had dreams of joining the army from a young age. He never planned on joining the army, but after failing to gain many qualifications at school he realized being a soldier was possibly the only thing he was good at.
His father was KIA while on a covert operation in Africa, because of this not much is know to the family about his death. His brother is somewhere in France but they have not received a letter in the past 3months.
Elliot just passed his basic training with "flying colours" he is also hoping to gain future qualifications such as his engineering apprenticeship or his radio operations qualification
Military Rank:
Private.
Writing Sample: Elliot tensed his muscles tightly as he firmed his grip on his rifle. He was cold, tired and just wanted to get the hell out of here. He tried to shuffle onto his side but was conscious on the amount of sound he was making. He heard a crunch not to far from where he was residing. It was the sound made when a boot steps onto a crunchy leaf.
He closed his eye's tight and though about his family. He was in two minds, does he dare fight back? or does he risk being captured or dieing in shame at not taking any Nazi's with him.
He opened his eye's staring into the darkness he felt the shot of adrenaline pump through his body. He lifted his head enough to take a glance at the wilderness. Moving about 7metres away from him was a tall, dark figure.
Elliot allowed himself to get up into a crouching position. He no longer cared about getting caught out by the axis. He placed the gun on his shoulder and peered down the sights aimed at the figure. He placed his finger on the cold trigger and tensed his hand. The moment of truth was upon him.
**Hope this is better**
Account E-Mail:ell_619@hotmail.com
Name:Elliot Watson
Nationality:English
What Army will Your Character Serve Beneath?
UK
Character History:
Born in Manchester UK, Elliot was born into typical armed forces family. His Dad was a soldier and his older brother had dreams of joining the army from a young age. He never planned on joining the army, but after failing to gain many qualifications at school he realized being a soldier was possibly the only thing he was good at.
His father was KIA while on a covert operation in Africa, because of this not much is know to the family about his death. His brother is somewhere in France but they have not received a letter in the past 3months.
Elliot just passed his basic training with "flying colours" he is also hoping to gain future qualifications such as his engineering apprenticeship or his radio operations qualification
Military Rank:
Private.
Writing Sample: Elliot tensed his muscles tightly as he firmed his grip on his rifle. He was cold, tired and just wanted to get the hell out of here. He tried to shuffle onto his side but was conscious on the amount of sound he was making. He heard a crunch not to far from where he was residing. It was the sound made when a boot steps onto a crunchy leaf.
He closed his eye's tight and though about his family. He was in two minds, does he dare fight back? or does he risk being captured or dieing in shame at not taking any Nazi's with him.
He opened his eye's staring into the darkness he felt the shot of adrenaline pump through his body. He lifted his head enough to take a glance at the wilderness. Moving about 7metres away from him was a tall, dark figure.
Elliot allowed himself to get up into a crouching position. He no longer cared about getting caught out by the axis. He placed the gun on his shoulder and peered down the sights aimed at the figure. He placed his finger on the cold trigger and tensed his hand. The moment of truth was upon him.
**Hope this is better**