Post by Guest on Jul 14, 2008 18:29:49 GMT
It wasn't overly long or exciting, but it did the job of showing your writing skill. Welcome aboard, Sergeant Jones!
Account E-Mail: jones_r15@hotmail.com
Name: Ryan Jones
Nationality: USA
What Army will Your Character Serve Beneath?
UK or US: US
Character History:
Ryan grew up in a very hostile environment when he lived at home. This may have been why he enlisted in the Army as quickly as he did. When he was about four, his father began to abuse him and his brother. His father and mother fought a lot and normally, Ryan's dad would take out the rage on him. His brother was old enough to fight back and that is why he was never abused. Ryan finally gained the courage to tell one of his teachers at school and the teacher told the police, leading into a huge deal that ended his father in jail.
As Ryan grew older, he found it was easy to take out his anger by playing football or just working out, keeping him fit throughout his younger years. Ryan had started playing football when he was in the fourth grade, that was the earliest he could join. Once he started playing, he was amazing and throughout High School, scouts watched everyone of his games, also watching other players. Ryan was offered many scholarships but denied every one of them so he could pursue his dreams in the Army.
Military Rank:
Sgt
Writing Sample:
Ryan sat in the bushes with his BAR and watched the open field with no one in it. He had been there for hours and he hadn't seen anything. He stood up slowly and quietly, lowering his rifle and looking around cautiously. Why did he have the feeling that someone was staring at him...Watching him. He looked around once more before taking a step.
He heard something behind him. Ryan dropped to one knee and scouted the area carefully. He didn't see anything. He stood back up and continued to walk, watching for any sudden movements, and occasionally looking behind him. Another crackling noise came from behind him and again, he dropped to a knee and pointed his BAR in the direction of the noise. He waited a moment and noticed a slight movement.
He kept his attention on the movement. Was it a German? If so, how many were there? Jones only had two magazines of ammo and knew that he would need that if he were ambushed. He stood back up, knowing he had to move more quickly. He picked up his pace and kept looking back, listening for anything. He finally reached the edge of the small forest. He could see the Allied camp and knew he was safe. He turned around and started to walk backward, watching the woodlands.
Account E-Mail: jones_r15@hotmail.com
Name: Ryan Jones
Nationality: USA
What Army will Your Character Serve Beneath?
UK or US: US
Character History:
Ryan grew up in a very hostile environment when he lived at home. This may have been why he enlisted in the Army as quickly as he did. When he was about four, his father began to abuse him and his brother. His father and mother fought a lot and normally, Ryan's dad would take out the rage on him. His brother was old enough to fight back and that is why he was never abused. Ryan finally gained the courage to tell one of his teachers at school and the teacher told the police, leading into a huge deal that ended his father in jail.
As Ryan grew older, he found it was easy to take out his anger by playing football or just working out, keeping him fit throughout his younger years. Ryan had started playing football when he was in the fourth grade, that was the earliest he could join. Once he started playing, he was amazing and throughout High School, scouts watched everyone of his games, also watching other players. Ryan was offered many scholarships but denied every one of them so he could pursue his dreams in the Army.
Military Rank:
Sgt
Writing Sample:
Ryan sat in the bushes with his BAR and watched the open field with no one in it. He had been there for hours and he hadn't seen anything. He stood up slowly and quietly, lowering his rifle and looking around cautiously. Why did he have the feeling that someone was staring at him...Watching him. He looked around once more before taking a step.
He heard something behind him. Ryan dropped to one knee and scouted the area carefully. He didn't see anything. He stood back up and continued to walk, watching for any sudden movements, and occasionally looking behind him. Another crackling noise came from behind him and again, he dropped to a knee and pointed his BAR in the direction of the noise. He waited a moment and noticed a slight movement.
He kept his attention on the movement. Was it a German? If so, how many were there? Jones only had two magazines of ammo and knew that he would need that if he were ambushed. He stood back up, knowing he had to move more quickly. He picked up his pace and kept looking back, listening for anything. He finally reached the edge of the small forest. He could see the Allied camp and knew he was safe. He turned around and started to walk backward, watching the woodlands.