Post by hawkguest on May 11, 2008 17:29:48 GMT
Major General; The Rank is too High.
In comparison to your Writing Style, I'd suggest choosing a rank between Private & Sergeant to begin with.
Notify a staff member when you've decided.
~Danny
Account E-Mail: cherubvsalex@gmail.com
Name: Stanley (Hawk) Stuart.
Nationality: UK
What Army will Your Character Serve Beneath?
UK or US: UK
Character History: Stanley was born on the 8 September 1879. He grew up somewhere on a quite farm in the English countryside. Stanley joined the British army at the age of 18 and quickly went up the ranks in the UK army. He went into World War one as a sear gent of the 82nd infantry platoon. Luckily he survived and by capturing an important German bunker he was awarded the medal of valor and giving the rank of Major General so that he could help the army from the 'sidelines'
Military Rank:
Stanley is a Major General in the British army.
Writing sample:
Stanley stumbled over the rock. His hands and feet freezing, the German winter something he was not properly clothed for. He had been walking for over two days now,barely staying alive by eating scraps that he finds on the floor and drinking what ever he can find. He looked behind him ever so often to see if anyone was following him, no one ever was, or so he thought.......
In comparison to your Writing Style, I'd suggest choosing a rank between Private & Sergeant to begin with.
Notify a staff member when you've decided.
~Danny
Account E-Mail: cherubvsalex@gmail.com
Name: Stanley (Hawk) Stuart.
Nationality: UK
What Army will Your Character Serve Beneath?
UK or US: UK
Character History: Stanley was born on the 8 September 1879. He grew up somewhere on a quite farm in the English countryside. Stanley joined the British army at the age of 18 and quickly went up the ranks in the UK army. He went into World War one as a sear gent of the 82nd infantry platoon. Luckily he survived and by capturing an important German bunker he was awarded the medal of valor and giving the rank of Major General so that he could help the army from the 'sidelines'
Military Rank:
Stanley is a Major General in the British army.
Writing sample:
Stanley stumbled over the rock. His hands and feet freezing, the German winter something he was not properly clothed for. He had been walking for over two days now,barely staying alive by eating scraps that he finds on the floor and drinking what ever he can find. He looked behind him ever so often to see if anyone was following him, no one ever was, or so he thought.......