Post by Scott Barnes on Aug 8, 2008 19:15:21 GMT
Accepted! With Terms;[/b]
~ Although you have little if many mistakes, your writing style hasn't earnt you the Staff Sergeant rank, but I'm happy to offer you the rank of Sergeant (Minus one rank).
~Danny[/color]
Account E-Mail: sportsboy_255@hotmail.com
Name: Scott Barnes
Nationality: American
What Army will Your Character Serve Beneath?
UK or US: US
Character History:
- Scott Barnes was born in Buffalo, New York as an only child. Son of David Barnes and Mary Barnes. Born near a forest, David Barnes would teach Scott how to shoot a rifle. Scott learned from his father and learned everything about this mechanisim. Soon enough Scott would go out hunting with his father for food. He was one of the best shooters in his family tree.
When World War One broke out, Scott's Father David had to leave to serve his country. About 6 Months Later Mary barnes recieved a letter saying David Barnes was killed in combat. Scott had found out that night when his mother had been crying in her bedroom. Despite that day, Scott promised himself that he would serve his country after he graduated from highschool. When World War 2 broke out, Scott had graduated from highschool and had immidiately enlisted into an Airborne Unit. He was trained for years and had been promoted to the rank of Staff Sergeant after he had battled in Italy. Now he was sent to France and could wait to get his crosshairs on Adolf Hitler.
Military Rank:
- Staff Sergeant
Writing Sample:
Scenario: You’re alone behind enemy lines and you get the eerie feeling someone’s watching you. You’re trying to remain quiet, stay low, work your way back to the frontlines - but you can’t help but feel you’re being followed… (How does your character React? What’s running through their mind?)
Scott had been walking down a single path for atleast 10 minutes and thought he would never find find his objective, but for some reason Scott was starting to get this weird chill down his back as he walked donw the path. As he kept walking he could hear soft footsteps walk behind him. Scott quickly turned around to see what was there, but he saw nothing. So he decided to keep walking. He kept on going, but he could still hear soft footsteps walk behind him. He turned around again swing his Thompson quickly, but saw no one. Now Scott was worried
because he didnt now who was following him. As he turned back forward he could see his objective.
His objective was a Church tower that could help serve as a recky point. (OOC Note: Reconnasince Point) He ran over quietly to the church. As he reached the door he looked down his sites and made sure the church was clear. Afterwards he ran up the Tower steps all the way to the top. When he got to the top he sat down and reached for his binoculars. When he looked out he search for a Ammo Depot as he did. It seemed far away. but he wasent sure how far. He marked it down on a paper and looked down at the town entrance.
As he looked closely he saw a German Soldier run through the gate. Scott had realised, that was the guy following him. As he saw this he put his papers and binoculars away and grabbed his Thompson. He picked it up and ran down the stairs quietly. When he got to the bottom he quietly pulled out his bayonet as the german soldier got closer. When he walked through the door, Scott quickly grab the germans head and slit his through, the soldier had dropped to the ground dead. Before Scott left, he search the germans body for intelligence. He had found a map of the town and a map of the Ammo Depot. He also found convoy plans. Afterwards he hid the body and ran back to his Hq.
Prefered Weapon: Thompson
~ Although you have little if many mistakes, your writing style hasn't earnt you the Staff Sergeant rank, but I'm happy to offer you the rank of Sergeant (Minus one rank).
~Danny[/color]
Account E-Mail: sportsboy_255@hotmail.com
Name: Scott Barnes
Nationality: American
What Army will Your Character Serve Beneath?
UK or US: US
Character History:
- Scott Barnes was born in Buffalo, New York as an only child. Son of David Barnes and Mary Barnes. Born near a forest, David Barnes would teach Scott how to shoot a rifle. Scott learned from his father and learned everything about this mechanisim. Soon enough Scott would go out hunting with his father for food. He was one of the best shooters in his family tree.
When World War One broke out, Scott's Father David had to leave to serve his country. About 6 Months Later Mary barnes recieved a letter saying David Barnes was killed in combat. Scott had found out that night when his mother had been crying in her bedroom. Despite that day, Scott promised himself that he would serve his country after he graduated from highschool. When World War 2 broke out, Scott had graduated from highschool and had immidiately enlisted into an Airborne Unit. He was trained for years and had been promoted to the rank of Staff Sergeant after he had battled in Italy. Now he was sent to France and could wait to get his crosshairs on Adolf Hitler.
Military Rank:
- Staff Sergeant
Writing Sample:
Scenario: You’re alone behind enemy lines and you get the eerie feeling someone’s watching you. You’re trying to remain quiet, stay low, work your way back to the frontlines - but you can’t help but feel you’re being followed… (How does your character React? What’s running through their mind?)
Scott had been walking down a single path for atleast 10 minutes and thought he would never find find his objective, but for some reason Scott was starting to get this weird chill down his back as he walked donw the path. As he kept walking he could hear soft footsteps walk behind him. Scott quickly turned around to see what was there, but he saw nothing. So he decided to keep walking. He kept on going, but he could still hear soft footsteps walk behind him. He turned around again swing his Thompson quickly, but saw no one. Now Scott was worried
because he didnt now who was following him. As he turned back forward he could see his objective.
His objective was a Church tower that could help serve as a recky point. (OOC Note: Reconnasince Point) He ran over quietly to the church. As he reached the door he looked down his sites and made sure the church was clear. Afterwards he ran up the Tower steps all the way to the top. When he got to the top he sat down and reached for his binoculars. When he looked out he search for a Ammo Depot as he did. It seemed far away. but he wasent sure how far. He marked it down on a paper and looked down at the town entrance.
As he looked closely he saw a German Soldier run through the gate. Scott had realised, that was the guy following him. As he saw this he put his papers and binoculars away and grabbed his Thompson. He picked it up and ran down the stairs quietly. When he got to the bottom he quietly pulled out his bayonet as the german soldier got closer. When he walked through the door, Scott quickly grab the germans head and slit his through, the soldier had dropped to the ground dead. Before Scott left, he search the germans body for intelligence. He had found a map of the town and a map of the Ammo Depot. He also found convoy plans. Afterwards he hid the body and ran back to his Hq.
Prefered Weapon: Thompson