Post by Zeke Sturm Guest on Jul 27, 2008 14:34:35 GMT
Denied;
I'm not sure if you're the same person who's already made two Bio Sign-Ups, but as Daniel Brennan (Global Moderator) has already said. CO-Ranks are currently on a cool-down effect.
Please select an Enlisted Rank
Thank You,
ACCEPTED![/B]
~Danny[/color]
Account E-Mail: Munakage@gmail.com
Name: Zeke Sturm
Nationality: German (Defected from Nazis)
What Army will Your Character Serve Beneath?
UK or US: UK
Character History:
Zeke was, at first, a member of the army of Nazi Germany. Hitler had pulled him into it like he had so many others. Zeke had remained somehow ignorant of the real goings-on in the concentration camps. He had been informed by a superior that the Jews were being sent out of the country, not killed. He did not believe in civilian death, which is what lead to the events that would happen as he came to realize that the jews were dying. After being taken to a concentration camps to oversee a gassing, he realized he had been gravely misinformed. He immediately made plans to defect from Hitler's Nazis. One night, he relieved a guard of his duties on the perimeter of the camp. And he disappeared from Nazi Germany. He handed over his gun to the british as a show of loyalty, and gave them some information on the camp he had been assigned to. With this information, the British mounted a surprise attack on the concentration camp. They liberated it, and Zeke was promoted for his service to the allies.
Military Rank:
Lieutenant
Writing Sample:
Scenario: You’re alone behind enemy lines and you get the eerie feeling someone’s watching you. You’re trying to remain quiet, stay low, work your way back to the frontlines - but you can’t help but feel you’re being followed… (How does your character React? What’s running through their mind?)
(I will do this as if it is an RP post, if I do it wrong, please explain how so I can fix it)
Zeke was crouched behind some bushes, protected by a small bluff to his rear, searching for his former comrades. He believed He was being watched, however, and was looking everywhere for the culprits. He eventually decided to make a false presence known. He pulled the pin on a grenade and rolled it about 20 feet away. He hid in a crevice in the bluff, and winced as the shockwave passed, carrying shrapnel past his crevice. He immediately saw the shining of a sniper's scope, and he pressed himself further into the crevice. He himself was armed with a Lee enfield, and he decided to use it. He crouched as low as he could, and crawled behind the bushes, poking the barrel of his rifle between two. The sniper would have a hard time seeing him, but he could still see the shining scope. There was a large crack. The glint disappeared, and Zeke smiled as he saw the bank of the river turning red. He was momentarily safe. Only momentarily, however.
I'm not sure if you're the same person who's already made two Bio Sign-Ups, but as Daniel Brennan (Global Moderator) has already said. CO-Ranks are currently on a cool-down effect.
Please select an Enlisted Rank
Thank You,
ACCEPTED![/B]
~Danny[/color]
Account E-Mail: Munakage@gmail.com
Name: Zeke Sturm
Nationality: German (Defected from Nazis)
What Army will Your Character Serve Beneath?
UK or US: UK
Character History:
Zeke was, at first, a member of the army of Nazi Germany. Hitler had pulled him into it like he had so many others. Zeke had remained somehow ignorant of the real goings-on in the concentration camps. He had been informed by a superior that the Jews were being sent out of the country, not killed. He did not believe in civilian death, which is what lead to the events that would happen as he came to realize that the jews were dying. After being taken to a concentration camps to oversee a gassing, he realized he had been gravely misinformed. He immediately made plans to defect from Hitler's Nazis. One night, he relieved a guard of his duties on the perimeter of the camp. And he disappeared from Nazi Germany. He handed over his gun to the british as a show of loyalty, and gave them some information on the camp he had been assigned to. With this information, the British mounted a surprise attack on the concentration camp. They liberated it, and Zeke was promoted for his service to the allies.
Military Rank:
Lieutenant
Writing Sample:
Scenario: You’re alone behind enemy lines and you get the eerie feeling someone’s watching you. You’re trying to remain quiet, stay low, work your way back to the frontlines - but you can’t help but feel you’re being followed… (How does your character React? What’s running through their mind?)
(I will do this as if it is an RP post, if I do it wrong, please explain how so I can fix it)
Zeke was crouched behind some bushes, protected by a small bluff to his rear, searching for his former comrades. He believed He was being watched, however, and was looking everywhere for the culprits. He eventually decided to make a false presence known. He pulled the pin on a grenade and rolled it about 20 feet away. He hid in a crevice in the bluff, and winced as the shockwave passed, carrying shrapnel past his crevice. He immediately saw the shining of a sniper's scope, and he pressed himself further into the crevice. He himself was armed with a Lee enfield, and he decided to use it. He crouched as low as he could, and crawled behind the bushes, poking the barrel of his rifle between two. The sniper would have a hard time seeing him, but he could still see the shining scope. There was a large crack. The glint disappeared, and Zeke smiled as he saw the bank of the river turning red. He was momentarily safe. Only momentarily, however.