Post by Guest on Jun 25, 2008 17:54:30 GMT
Accepted, with Conditions:[/b]
You have quite a few punctuation & Spelling mistakes, but I'm happy to over see these minor errors, so long as you keep up your posting standards (minimum of 15 sentences).
Make sure you read the rules too!
~Danny[/color]
Account E-Mail: saberguy@sbcglobal.net
Name: John Howard
Nationality:
- You may pick any, but remember, you will be apart of the US/UK Army - This is until new mass rank threads are added for other nationalities. Upper England
What Army will Your Character Serve Beneath?
UK or US: UK
Character History:
John was born in Darlington, England. His father was a Royal Air force Pilot who served in World War I. John was inspired by his father to join the Royal Army in 1938. He was born on June 6, 1918. He grew up at airfield bases around the U.K. He would have marvelous times with his father on plane rides (only when he was a young boy) When he was 15 his father died in a practice run with a new plane (there was a bad engine). He and his mother moved to Cardiff, Wales. He enlisted in the Royal Army at age 19. He was training to be in the Infantry.
Military Rank:
- You may ‘TRY’ to request any rank, but depending on your Bio Quality and the current Rank’s Occupation, you may be asked to choose or another - or automatically assigned to one seen best fit. Private
So please choose wisely, use the following links to help you choose.
UK Military Ranks!
US Military Ranks!
Writing Sample:
Scenario: You’re alone behind enemy lines and you get the eerie feeling someone’s watching you. You’re trying to remain quiet, stay low, work your way back to the frontlines - but you can’t help but feel you’re being followed… (How does your character React? What’s running through their mind?)
This was John’s first battle and the Allied line was just pushed back when he was on a scouting mission. He heard a single rife shot and the man next to him fell. He then turned and ran back to there line to find no one was there. He ran to an artillery shell’s hole and ducked in. He ran to another one. When he was about to run he heard footsteps coming from behind him. He looked no one there. He ran to another hole. He heard more footsteps. He decided to shoot the next time he got up only to find he dropped his rifle when he was running. He took off running again and got to a tree when he heard some one yell something in German. He then took off running as fast as he could to run into his Sergeant face-to-face. The Sergeant said “Where in bloody hell have you been! I’ve had a squad looking for the recon group for and hour.” “Sorry Sir” replied John.
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You have quite a few punctuation & Spelling mistakes, but I'm happy to over see these minor errors, so long as you keep up your posting standards (minimum of 15 sentences).
Make sure you read the rules too!
~Danny[/color]
Account E-Mail: saberguy@sbcglobal.net
Name: John Howard
Nationality:
- You may pick any, but remember, you will be apart of the US/UK Army - This is until new mass rank threads are added for other nationalities. Upper England
What Army will Your Character Serve Beneath?
UK or US: UK
Character History:
John was born in Darlington, England. His father was a Royal Air force Pilot who served in World War I. John was inspired by his father to join the Royal Army in 1938. He was born on June 6, 1918. He grew up at airfield bases around the U.K. He would have marvelous times with his father on plane rides (only when he was a young boy) When he was 15 his father died in a practice run with a new plane (there was a bad engine). He and his mother moved to Cardiff, Wales. He enlisted in the Royal Army at age 19. He was training to be in the Infantry.
Military Rank:
- You may ‘TRY’ to request any rank, but depending on your Bio Quality and the current Rank’s Occupation, you may be asked to choose or another - or automatically assigned to one seen best fit. Private
So please choose wisely, use the following links to help you choose.
UK Military Ranks!
US Military Ranks!
Writing Sample:
Scenario: You’re alone behind enemy lines and you get the eerie feeling someone’s watching you. You’re trying to remain quiet, stay low, work your way back to the frontlines - but you can’t help but feel you’re being followed… (How does your character React? What’s running through their mind?)
This was John’s first battle and the Allied line was just pushed back when he was on a scouting mission. He heard a single rife shot and the man next to him fell. He then turned and ran back to there line to find no one was there. He ran to an artillery shell’s hole and ducked in. He ran to another one. When he was about to run he heard footsteps coming from behind him. He looked no one there. He ran to another hole. He heard more footsteps. He decided to shoot the next time he got up only to find he dropped his rifle when he was running. He took off running again and got to a tree when he heard some one yell something in German. He then took off running as fast as he could to run into his Sergeant face-to-face. The Sergeant said “Where in bloody hell have you been! I’ve had a squad looking for the recon group for and hour.” “Sorry Sir” replied John.
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