Private Lewis Jones

[Lewis Jones]

A few Conditions;
You've written your Scenario in "First Person" - This board is purely based in "Third Person", please make the alterations in order to be accepted!

Thank You,
~Danny

Account E-Mail: [e-mail]

Name: Lewis Jones

Nationality:
Welsh

What Army will Your Character Serve Beneath?
UK

Character History:
Born in 1921 in the city of Cardiff, Lewis had two sisters and one brother. As a child he went to Whitchurch Primary and then to Whitchurch High. He had good grades and thought very little for others. But as soon as he graduated in 1941, Germans bombed Cardiff and his family died in an air raid. Desperate to avenge his family's death, he signed up for the army immediately.

Military Rank:
- Private

Writing Sample:
I felt scared and at the same time excited but I still had the feeling some one was watching me. I quickly ran for cover in case there was a German behind me.Then I saw him I grabbed my combat knife and slashed his belly. And continued with my mission.i I'm still scared because I could die but at the same time excited because i can finally avenge my family's death.

[Lewis Jones]

Accepted!
I have to say, I doubted you would amend your profile. Please try to retain a posting standard of '15' lines when role playing; none the less, welcome to the board.
~Danny

Account E-Mail: [e-mail]

Name: Lewis Jones

Nationality:
Welsh

What Army will Your Character Serve Beneath?
UK

Character History:
Born in 1921 in the city of Cardiff, Lewis had two sisters and one brother. As a child he went to Whitchurch Primary and then to Whitchurch High. He had good grades and thought very little for others. But as soon as he graduated in 1941, Germans bombed Cardiff and his family died in an air raid. Desperate to avenge his family's death, he signed up for the army immediately.

Military Rank:
- Private

Writing Sample:
Lewis felt scared and at the same time excited; yet he still had the feeling some one was watching him. HE quickly ran for cover to avoid any hostile cover from the German threat nearby.

Lewis stopped in his tracks. Then he saw him. Just inches away from Lewis' form, taunting, laughing, mocking. He held a Luger pistol in his firm grasp.

Panicking, Lewis grabbed his combat knife and slashed the German's abdomen, sending him crashing down to the harsh forest floor.

Breathing heavily, Lewis continued on his mission. Today was the day he would avenge his family's deaths.